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SleepScout® : Sleep Recoder
Be Present: Daily Routine27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Sleep Recoder”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Daily Routine”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
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Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 323 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 73 characters.
1,806 characters.
Enough substance
947 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.15 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
89 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
101 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 785 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 167 days ago.
Generic notes: “1- Improvements 2- Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “(additional quick fix on live activity) Fresh splash screen with a new…”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
92 MB.
Reasonable download size
104 MB.