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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
SleepScout® : Sleep Recoder
Habit Tracker - Haby27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Sleep Recoder”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Haby”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Goal Tracker & Daily Planner”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “tracker”.
First paragraph is 323 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 64 characters.
1,806 characters.
Enough substance
2,107 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.15 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.05 average.
89 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
37 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 785 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 665 days ago.
Generic notes: “1- Improvements 2- Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
177 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
6 languages.
92 MB.
Reasonable download size
25 MB.