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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
BMS-TOOL
Overkill SolarSection by section
The numbers
Keywords in title + subtitle
Check by check
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “TOOL”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Utilities”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 259 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 247 characters.
2,026 characters.
Enough substance
662 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
21 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 480 days ago.
Generic notes: “Optimize display and fix issues”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Connect to Overkill Solar Pathfinder BMS”
5 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
40 MB.
Reasonable download size
21 MB.