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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Serene: Sleep & Meditation
Breathe with Breath PlayerSerene: Sleep & Meditation
Relax, Sleep, Meditate, Focus
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Sleep & Meditation”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Relax, Sleep, Meditate, Focus”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “sleep”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 189 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 53 characters.
3,731 characters.
Enough substance
2,677 characters.
10 bullet lines, 27 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.78 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.72 average.
45 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
50 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 115 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor bug fixes and performance improvements.”
Release notes say something
427 characters of release notes.
7 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
51 MB.
Reasonable download size
456 MB.