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talkmaker - texting story
twime - 围观MJ的推文talkmaker - texting story
Happyverse Tech Co., Ltd.
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “texting story”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “围观MJ的推文”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Utilities”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 40 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 50 characters.
532 characters.
Enough substance
499 characters.
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.00 average.
516 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 12 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 163 days ago.
Generic notes: “修复了一些已知的问题”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “修复了一些已知的问题”
5 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
68 MB.
Reasonable download size
44 MB.