Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Fast & Secure Proxy”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“An unlimited secure proxy”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “secure”, “proxy”.
First paragraph is 255 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 17 characters.
255 characters.
Enough substance
1,112 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.67 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.00 average.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 934 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 369 days ago.
Generic notes: “fixed bugs”
Release notes say something
369 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
48 MB.
Reasonable download size
121 MB.