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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Better Breathe
Anxiety-Tracker14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Breathing Exercises”
Has a subtitle
“Mood, Stress & Panic Relief”
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 515 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 256 characters.
3,868 characters.
Enough substance
3,687 characters.
53 bullet lines, 27 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
38 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.93 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 621 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 20 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes to enhance performance and stability.”
Release notes say something
289 characters of release notes.
10 languages.
Localised listing
72 languages.
177 MB.
Reasonable download size
215 MB.