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Omnipemf7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 594 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 288 characters.
2,200 characters.
Enough substance
1,120 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.44 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.75 average.
9 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
69 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 131 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 161 days ago.
500 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Updates for Statistics, UI improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
71 MB.
Reasonable download size
68 MB.