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Invitation Maker Card Design
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RSVP, Wedding & Birthday Cards
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Virtual Cards”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“RSVP, Wedding & Birthday Cards”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “cards”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 98 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 280 characters.
2,279 characters.
Enough substance
2,116 characters.
9 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.33 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
6 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,155 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
Last 40 written reviews average 2.3★.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
349 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bugfixes and improvements”
13 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
86 MB.
Reasonable download size
55 MB.