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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
9D Breathwork
Beats and Breath13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Guided Breathwork Sessions”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 68 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 100 characters.
1,307 characters.
Enough substance
1,828 characters.
5 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.97 average.
242 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
74 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 163 days ago.
Generic notes: “A quick update and some bug fixes for our iPad users”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “We've added a new search feature to the app.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
83 MB.
Reasonable download size
86 MB.