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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
9D Breathwork
Coherence - Breathwork13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Breathwork”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Master Your Breath & Mind”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 68 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 30 characters.
1,307 characters.
Enough substance
2,539 characters.
5 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
28 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.78 average.
242 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
591 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “A quick update and some bug fixes for our iPad users”
Release notes say something
1569 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
83 MB.
Reasonable download size
176 MB.