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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Breathe Right: Nasal Breathing
Charlotte SimmonsBreathe Right: Nasal Breathing
Breathing for Sleep & Stress
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Nasal Breathing”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Breathing for Sleep & Stress”
Has a subtitle
“Breathwork”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “breathing”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 54 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 248 characters.
2,164 characters.
Enough substance
1,818 characters.
0 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 707 days ago.
120 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Nee Breathes. - New latest videos. - Calendar updates. - Bug fixes …”
10 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
205 MB.
Reasonable download size
296 MB.