Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Atem Alchemie
Better Breathe13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 52 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 515 characters.
2,271 characters.
Enough substance
3,868 characters.
0 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
53 bullet lines, 27 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 507 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 621 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fix and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes to enhance performance and stability.”
10 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
302 MB.
Reasonable download size
177 MB.