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Knitflow — Knitting & Crochet
DayGram - One Line a Day Diary29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Knitting & Crochet”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “One Line a Day Diary”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Row counter & PDF annotation”
Has a subtitle
“Private Journal & Daily Notes”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 57 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
520 characters.
Enough substance
1,364 characters.
6 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.49 average.
14 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
251 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
714 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and usability improvements”
4 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
41 MB.
Reasonable download size
64 MB.