Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
hair2hair: Scanner + AI Coach
Scan products. Ask Hannah.
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Scanner + AI Coach”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Hair Care Schedule & Journal”
Has a subtitle
“Scan products. Ask Hannah.”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “hair”, “care”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 76 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 73 characters.
1,597 characters.
Enough substance
3,061 characters.
10 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.65 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.42 average.
78 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
312 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 74 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
Generic notes: “Arabic language added”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements.”
5 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
77 MB.
Reasonable download size
128 MB.