Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Hairelya: Hair Care Routine
Your personal hair care diary
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hair Care Routine”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Your personal hair care diary”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “hair”, “care”.
First paragraph is 76 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 43 characters.
1,597 characters.
Enough substance
2,447 characters.
10 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
28 bullet lines, 25 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.65 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.67 average.
78 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 73 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
Generic notes: “Arabic language added”
Release notes say something
833 characters of release notes.
5 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
77 MB.
Reasonable download size
43 MB.