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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
VPN - Fast Super VPN Proxy
Fast VPN: Private Proxy ShieldFast VPN: Private Proxy Shield
Lightning Speed, No Logs Ever
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fast Super VPN Proxy”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Private Proxy Shield”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“WiFi Security & School VPN”
Has a subtitle
“Lightning Speed, No Logs Ever”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “vpn”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 38 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 205 characters.
1,153 characters.
Enough substance
2,974 characters.
9 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
32 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.40 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
10 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 52 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 21 days ago.
Generic notes: “fix bugs”
Release notes say something
64 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
75 MB.
Reasonable download size
6 MB.