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PaoPao - 和MJ的甜蜜通话
talkmaker - texting storytalkmaker - texting story
Happyverse Tech Co., Ltd.
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “和MJ的甜蜜通话”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “texting story”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Utilities”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 27 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 40 characters.
430 characters.
Enough substance
532 characters.
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.80 average.
63 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
516 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 80 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “修复了一些已知的问题”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “修复了一些已知的问题”
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
70 MB.
Reasonable download size
68 MB.