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PaoPao - 和MJ的甜蜜通话
bimobimo17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
8/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “和MJ的甜蜜通话”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Utilities”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 27 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 36 characters.
430 characters.
Enough substance
36 characters.
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.63 average.
63 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 80 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
Generic notes: “修复了一些已知的问题”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化部分内容”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
70 MB.
Reasonable download size
44 MB.