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NatureMe: Nature Meditation
Outbound: Walk & Hike OutsideOutbound: Walk & Hike Outside
Simple habit for better health
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Nature Meditation”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Walk & Hike Outside”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Simple habit for better health”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 368 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
2,948 characters.
Enough substance
4,000 characters.
11 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 31 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.77 average.
35 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
301 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 227 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 35 days ago.
Generic notes: “Metadata update only”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
61 MB.
Reasonable download size
95 MB.