Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
CardiaLink-Heart rate&Health
Blood Pressure&Blood Sugar
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Heart rate&Health”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Feel Heart Rhythm”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Blood Pressure&Blood Sugar”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 32 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 70 characters.
2,098 characters.
Enough substance
3,997 characters.
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.62 average.
8,219 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,422 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 19 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 268 days ago.
141 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed some bugs”
15 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
110 MB.
Reasonable download size
150 MB.