Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
HeartSnap:Health Tracker
Record Blood Sugar&Pressure
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Heart rate&Health”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Health Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Blood Pressure&Blood Sugar”
Has a subtitle
“Record Blood Sugar&Pressure”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 32 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 55 characters.
2,098 characters.
Enough substance
3,351 characters.
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.53 average.
8,219 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,906 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 19 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 29 days ago.
141 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved user experience. Fixed bugs.”
15 languages.
Localised listing
15 languages.
110 MB.
Reasonable download size
145 MB.