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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Invitation Maker Card Design
RSVP, Wedding & Birthday Cards
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “remodel app”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The House Interior Makeover”
Has a subtitle
“RSVP, Wedding & Birthday Cards”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “cards”.
First paragraph is 57 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 98 characters.
937 characters.
Enough substance
2,279 characters.
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.52 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.33 average.
21 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
6 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fixed bugs, improved app performance.”
Release notes say something
349 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
13 languages.
161 MB.
Reasonable download size
86 MB.