Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
PlayDiary
LoyaPlay: Play & Earn RewardsLoyaPlay: Play & Earn Rewards
Redeem for Cash & Gift Cards
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Play & Earn Rewards”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Entertainment”
Has a subtitle
“Redeem for Cash & Gift Cards”
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 360 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 94 characters.
1,443 characters.
Enough substance
1,740 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.75 average.
161 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
525 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 80 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “fix bugs”
Release notes say something
204 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
10 languages.
344 MB.
Reasonable download size
172 MB.