Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Napping-Sound Sleep Sanctuary
Sound Machine: Relaxing SoundsNapping-Sound Sleep Sanctuary
Calm Sounds, Voice for Sleep
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Sound Sleep Sanctuary”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Relaxing Sounds”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Calm Sounds, Voice for Sleep”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “sounds”, “sleep”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 222 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 463 characters.
1,582 characters.
Enough substance
1,683 characters.
5 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.40 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 274 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 754 days ago.
No release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Better and Improved UI!”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
92 MB.
Reasonable download size
108 MB.