Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Protect Privacy”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Offline KJV NIV Study & Recap”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 79 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 201 characters.
656 characters.
Enough substance
1,866 characters.
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.25 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.37 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
425 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 51 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 99 days ago.
Generic notes: “fix bug”
Release notes say something
93 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
37 languages.
71 MB.
Reasonable download size
95 MB.