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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Ognomy - The Sleep Apnea App
Meet Sleep Apnea Docs Online
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Somnio+”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “The Sleep Apnea App”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“Snore tracker, recorder”
Has a subtitle
“Meet Sleep Apnea Docs Online”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “sleep”, “apnea”.
First paragraph is 30 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 137 characters.
876 characters.
Enough substance
1,479 characters.
7 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
1 iPad screenshots.
3.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
16 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
736 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 266 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 560 days ago.
No release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “User Experience Improvements Bug Fixes”
33 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
26 MB.
Reasonable download size
14 MB.