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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
My Night Notes
Journal App: Diary with Lock14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Diary with Lock”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“A quiet way to close the day”
Has a subtitle
“daily journaling, gratitude”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 103 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 304 characters.
1,217 characters.
Enough substance
2,172 characters.
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 222 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 404 days ago.
69 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “**BUG FIX** - fixed bug where questions were not showing up”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
18 MB.
Reasonable download size
4 MB.