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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Bus Stop Journey
Dubai Van Simulator Game 3D16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Games”
Has a subtitle
“Coach Van Simulation Games”
5/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “van”, “games”.
First paragraph is 330 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 385 characters.
1,109 characters.
Enough substance
3,915 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 240 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 150 days ago.
No release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “remove bugs improve graphics”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
811 MB.
Reasonable download size
247 MB.