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Sleep Recorder - Snore Tracker
Snore Tracker — My Sleep Lab30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Snore Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “My Sleep Lab”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Hear your snore & sleep talk”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “snore”, “sleep”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 167 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 47 characters.
2,462 characters.
Enough substance
3,138 characters.
33 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
38 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
77 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 39 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
377 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
229 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
9 languages.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
43 MB.