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Apple Fitness9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Fitness and Fitness+”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “fitness”.
First paragraph is 97 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 32 characters.
966 characters.
Enough substance
3,141 characters.
7 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
29 bullet lines, 25 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.87 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11,498 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 30 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
336 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes and Feature Enhancements”
1 language.
Localised listing
33 languages.
4 MB.
Reasonable download size
13 MB.