Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
The Walk: Fitness Tracker Game
Walking RPG: Hero health game30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fitness Tracker Game”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hero health game”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Every Step Counts”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 152 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 16 characters.
3,079 characters.
Enough substance
2,337 characters.
3 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.44 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
790 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,120 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 850 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 49 days ago.
85 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “This update contains stability improvements and general bug fixes.”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
302 MB.
Reasonable download size
229 MB.