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Adventures in Odyssey Club
Listener Kids: Bible Songs26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Bible Songs”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Christian Music & Kids Videos”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “kids”.
First paragraph is 354 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 36 characters.
1,582 characters.
Enough substance
936 characters.
9 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.40 average.
8,316 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 92 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 108 days ago.
85 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Various improvements and bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
89 MB.
Reasonable download size
53 MB.