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Atlantic Health
MSK MyChart15/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Medical”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 176 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 102 characters.
685 characters.
Enough substance
1,083 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.56 average.
339 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,225 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 70 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 303 days ago.
Generic notes: “Miscellaneous fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Miscellaneous fixes and improvements.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
12 languages.
180 MB.
Reasonable download size
174 MB.