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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Sago Mini World: Kids Games
Dr. Panda Town Tales: New Life27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Kids Games”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “New Life”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 187 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 172 characters.
3,089 characters.
Enough substance
3,852 characters.
14 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
17 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.32 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
66,406 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
118,858 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 72 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
262 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “We've fixed some stability issues to offer a better experience!”
9 languages.
Localised listing
13 languages.
886 MB.
Reasonable download size
1162 MB.