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Sago Mini World: Kids Games
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Preschool Toddler Kids Game
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Kids Games”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fun games for curious kids.”
Has a subtitle
“Preschool Toddler Kids Game”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “games”, “kids”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 187 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 73 characters.
3,089 characters.
Enough substance
3,840 characters.
14 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.32 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.25 average.
66,406 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
573,939 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 72 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 18 days ago.
262 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
187 characters of release notes.
9 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
886 MB.
Reasonable download size
672 MB.