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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Breethe: Sleep & Meditation
WikiSleep: Sleep StoriesBreethe: Sleep & Meditation
OMG. I Can Meditate! Inc.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Sleep & Meditation”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Sleep Stories”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Sleep Stories for Insomnia”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “sleep”, “stories”.
First paragraph is 141 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 253 characters.
3,953 characters.
Enough substance
2,090 characters.
0 bullet lines, 33 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.33 average.
72,421 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 15 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 23 days ago.
130 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
456 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
160 MB.
Reasonable download size
61 MB.