Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Retro Fitness.
PureGym US14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Health & Fitness”
Has a subtitle
“Health & Fitness”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “fitness”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 191 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 40 characters.
986 characters.
Enough substance
866 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
2,234 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
17,475 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 37 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
Generic notes: “The app keeps getting better and better! This version includes enhance…”
Release notes say something
213 characters of release notes.
26 languages.
Localised listing
9 languages.
169 MB.
Reasonable download size
110 MB.