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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Huckleberry: Baby Tracker
Baby Sleep & Nap Schedule App
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Baby Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Baby Sleep & Nap Schedule App”
Has a subtitle
“Health & Fitness”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “baby”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 293 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 249 characters.
3,997 characters.
Enough substance
1,827 characters.
21 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.92 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.86 average.
74,237 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,376 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 62 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Updated onboarding experience for users with infants”
Release notes say something
130 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
226 MB.
Reasonable download size
61 MB.