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Diary With Password
Weekly Planner - Diary, Notes19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Diary, Notes”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“No Ads Journal Diary Notebook”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “diary”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 21 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 268 characters.
1,271 characters.
Enough substance
2,517 characters.
13 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.71 average.
27,110 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
15,328 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 52 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 34 days ago.
Generic notes: “- various small improvements - bug fix”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor improvements”
29 languages.
Localised listing
28 languages.
11 MB.
Reasonable download size
1704 MB.