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Diary With Password
Penbook: Paper Planner & NotesPenbook: Paper Planner & Notes
Journal, Notebook & Study
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Paper Planner & Notes”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“No Ads Journal Diary Notebook”
Has a subtitle
“Journal, Notebook & Study”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “diary”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 21 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 66 characters.
1,271 characters.
Enough substance
3,992 characters.
13 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
31 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.55 average.
27,110 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
45,363 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 52 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “- various small improvements - bug fix”
Release notes say something
245 characters of release notes.
29 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
11 MB.
Reasonable download size
136 MB.