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Notebook - Diary & Journal App
A diary that flips like a book
19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Diary & Journal App”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
“No Ads Journal Diary Notebook”
Has a subtitle
“A diary that flips like a book”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “diary”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “diary”.
First paragraph is 21 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 136 characters.
1,271 characters.
Enough substance
2,030 characters.
13 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
27,110 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14,317 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 52 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
Generic notes: “- various small improvements - bug fix”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Updated OS compatibility and made minor fixes.”
29 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
11 MB.
Reasonable download size
10 MB.