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Now VPN - Best VPN Proxy
ATOM Store, Myanmar24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Best VPN Proxy”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “best”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Unlimited VPN for iPhone”
Has a subtitle
“Utilities”
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “vpn”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 29 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 383 characters.
1,848 characters.
Enough substance
1,332 characters.
15 bullet lines, 43 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.49 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.58 average.
68,121 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,420 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 79 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 63 days ago.
Generic notes: “Optimize nodes and fix known bugs”
Release notes say something
429 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
3 languages.
167 MB.
Reasonable download size
565 MB.