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Star Equestrian - Horse Ranch
Star Stable: Horses29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Horse Ranch”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Horses”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Raise your own horse or pony!”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 446 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 205 characters.
3,401 characters.
Enough substance
1,305 characters.
0 bullet lines, 30 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.41 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.20 average.
20,991 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
11,945 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 60 days ago.
1102 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
161 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
12 languages.
2194 MB.
Reasonable download size
247 MB.