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Star Equestrian - Horse Ranch
Wildshade Fantasy Horse Races29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Horse Ranch”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Open World MMO with Friends 3D”
Has a subtitle
“Breed and ride your horses!”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 446 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 258 characters.
3,401 characters.
Enough substance
1,950 characters.
0 bullet lines, 30 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
12 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.41 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.33 average.
20,991 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,837 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 11 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 172 days ago.
1102 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Ad network changed to Max - IAP updated”
1 language.
Localised listing
10 languages.
2194 MB.
Reasonable download size
985 MB.