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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Documents - File Manager
HaloVPN Pro: Fast VPN ProxyDocuments - File Manager
Docs Reader, Editor, Converter
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “File Manager”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Fast VPN Proxy”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Docs Reader, Editor, Converter”
Has a subtitle
“Private. Fast. One-Tap Secure”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “fast”.
First paragraph is 249 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 34 characters.
2,181 characters.
Enough substance
2,173 characters.
21 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.56 average.
628,712 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
18,296 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
168 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Faster connection performance - Improved network stability - Bug fix…”
11 languages.
Localised listing
18 languages.
431 MB.
Reasonable download size
106 MB.