Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Credible: Speech Coach
SleepScout® : Sleep RecoderBoth fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only SleepScout®
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Speech Coach”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Sleep Recoder”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Communication Skills Training”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 243 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 323 characters.
3,786 characters.
Enough substance
1,806 characters.
18 bullet lines, 20 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.41 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.15 average.
241 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
89 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 675 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 785 days ago.
332 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “1- Improvements 2- Bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
207 MB.
Reasonable download size
92 MB.