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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
BodyState: Vitals Tracker
Sonar - Health & PerformanceSonar - Health & Performance
Fitness, Sleep & Recovery
Section by section
The numbers
Keywords in title + subtitle
Check by check
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Vitals Tracker”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Health & Performance”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Body Battery & Stress Monitor”
Has a subtitle
“Fitness, Sleep & Recovery”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 46 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 390 characters.
2,719 characters.
Enough substance
3,649 characters.
18 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.66 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
1,674 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
335 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 156 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 73 days ago.
218 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Various bug fixes and performance improvements, along with updated int…”
13 languages.
Localised listing
31 languages.
162 MB.
Reasonable download size
117 MB.