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Pausa: Honest Journal & Coach
Mirror: Mental Health JournalMirror: Mental Health Journal
Track Moods, Journal & Reflect
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Honest Journal & Coach”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Mental Health Journal”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“The Journal That Pushes Back”
Has a subtitle
“Track Moods, Journal & Reflect”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “journal”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “journal”.
First paragraph is 93 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 311 characters.
3,203 characters.
Enough substance
1,963 characters.
10 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
16 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.70 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.83 average.
20 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
800 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
62 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
460 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
42 MB.
Reasonable download size
74 MB.