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Notebook - Diary & Journal App
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A diary that flips like a book
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Diary & Journal App”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“A diary that flips like a book”
Has a subtitle
“Private Notes with Password”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “diary”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 136 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 199 characters.
2,030 characters.
Enough substance
1,248 characters.
8 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.69 average.
14,317 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
13,258 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 22 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 128 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Updated OS compatibility and made minor fixes.”
Release notes say something
561 characters of release notes.
8 languages.
Localised listing
20 languages.
10 MB.
Reasonable download size
3 MB.